ACTION: Complain to the Guardian about their use of passive voice, which shields the public from learning of the illegal activity of Israeli settlers

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This action follows The Guardian’s publication of an article reporting on a NBC news team member not being spared from illegal Israeli settler attacks in which the title omits the perpetrator, by using the passive voice, and waits until the ninth line when including the title to declare who attacked the Palestinian woman and NBC team member. Permitting the media to continue like this allows the public to be subjectively and inaccurately informed of the truth.

INSTRUCTIONS / STEPS:

  • Write the subject of the complaint yourself. It should reflect conerns of journalistic objectivity not being met due to delayed attribution and use of the passive voice.
  • After this, copy and paste the template message (below). Feel free to modify your copy so it does not exactly match the template. (*if you have more time, then please change your copy of our template or write your own using The Guardian’s guidelines on writing a complaint. Ensure the 500 words limit is kept in mind, our template is under 250 words.)
  • Sign off with your name.

TEMPLATE MESSAGE: 

Dear Reader’s Editor,

I am writing to formally lodge a complaint regarding the article “Palestinian woman and NBC News team reportedly attacked in West Bank,” written by Edward Helmore and published on Saturday, 29 August 2026.

I believe the framing of this piece fails to meet the standards of Clause 1 (Accuracy) of the Editors’ Code of Practice, as well as The Guardian’s own editorial guidelines regarding objectivity and clarity. Specifically, the article introduces significant ambiguity by delaying critical context.

The headline and opening paragraphs rely heavily on the passive voice, completely omitting the identity of the attackers. A reader must navigate down to the ninth line of the text to finally learn that Israeli settlers perpetrated the attack.

This delayed attribution creates a highly misleading ambiguity. For casual readers skimming headlines or social media feeds, the lack of immediate clarity allows room for incorrect assumptions—including the misapprehension that the perpetrators may have been Palestinian. In the current climate of rapidly advancing illegal Israeli settlement activity, failing to specify the source of the violence upfront obscures the reality of the situation and compromises the article’s objectivity.

To maintain The Guardian’s high standards of transparent and ethical journalism, it is paramount that the headline, subheadline, or opening paragraph be updated to clearly identify the perpetrators from the outset.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your response regarding how this formatting issue will be addressed and how it will not occur in the future, upholding the integrity expected of The Guardian over other media outlets.

Kind regards,

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